Ethnography revisions: Nerdy Birds

The suggestions/implications page was overall pretty good. They had a good deal of suggestions for the creator of the site, and made the document flow in a manner that made it easier to read. There were a few changes that  I recommended though. First off, they were a bit unclear with explaining the course ID's. If your reader does not know what that  means, and they are reading it for the first time, you are most likely going to confuse them. Explaining things in detail ensures that everybody will understand what it is you are trying to convey.  I also suggested that this group adda concluding sentence to the document. Since this document is in narrative form, adding a concluding sentence will help summing everything up. For our groups suggestions, we used bullet points. I personally think that writing the suggestions page in a narrative format is much more efficient. It is also easier for a reader to understand, because it seems to flow better and doesn't jump from point to point.